Y10W22PA - How the Australian Legal System Works

This week you wrote a three-paragraph explanatory piece about the Australian legal system. Now you'll read another student's piece and judge how strong it is. Working through how assessors evaluate explanatory writing sharpens your ability to apply the same lens to your own work.

Part 1

The Assessor Scorecard for

Explanatory – Explanatory Piece

An effective explanatory piece selects accurate information, organises it clearly, and expresses it with precision so the reader gains genuine understanding. Assessors weigh how well each choice of content, structure and language serves the reader's need to know.

Ideas & Content

Accuracy and selection — the right information chosen and explained with enough depth. The reader understands not just what, but how and why. No vague or incomplete explanations, and no key concepts named but not explained.

  • Accurate selection: chooses the right information and explains how and why it matters.

Structure & Cohesion

Clear organisation that signals what each section covers and how ideas connect. A clear topic sentence in each paragraph. No topics bleeding across paragraphs or paragraphs the reader must decode.

  • Clear organisation: signals each section’s purpose so the reader can follow without effort.

Audience & Purpose

Pitched at the right level for its reader — neither over-simplified nor assuming too much. Jargon explained when it is used. A tone that is neither too casual nor too dense for the intended reader.

  • Ask whether a: reader unfamiliar with the topic would understand each explanation without needing to look anything up.

Language Choices

Precise, subject-specific vocabulary that builds credibility and clarity. No vague or informal language standing in for accurate terms. Technical terms used where ordinary words would blur meaning.

  • Subject vocabulary: uses accurate terms that build clarity, precision and trust.

Conventions

Accurate spelling and punctuation — especially with technical and proper nouns. Errors in factual content or terminology undermine the reader's trust. Sentence variety that supports clarity.

  • Technical accuracy: keeps terminology, spelling and sentence control reliable throughout.

Part 2

Today’s Marking Targets

Task in one sentence

Write a three-paragraph explanatory piece covering how the Australian legal system is structured, what role courts at different levels play, and how law is made and applied.

Let’s Focus

Three strands matter most this week: Ideas & Content, Structure & Cohesion and Language Choices. The depth of ideas decides whether the legal concepts are genuinely explained with roles and connections or only listed. The organisation of the three paragraphs decides whether the reader can follow a complex system. Precise legal vocabulary decides how accurately the explanation communicates.

Ideas & Content

Strong writing this week shows Ideas & Content applied consistently — not just in isolated moments. Assessors look for genuine depth that serves this task: legal concepts explained with their roles and connections, not only named.

What markers scan for

  • Ideas & Content applied consistently throughout — not only in isolated moments.
  • The specific task and topic visibly shaping how the strand is demonstrated.

Score Bands

  • Basic

    Ideas & Content is present but applied inconsistently or only at a surface level.

  • Strong

    Ideas & Content is applied consistently, with genuine understanding of what this task requires.

  • Excellent

    Ideas & Content is applied with sustained precision throughout, shaped by the specific demands of this task.

Structure & Cohesion

Strong writing this week shows Structure & Cohesion applied consistently — not just in isolated moments. Assessors look for organisation that serves this task: three clearly focused, connected paragraphs the reader can follow through a complex system.

What markers scan for

  • Structure & Cohesion applied consistently throughout — not only in isolated moments.
  • The specific task and topic visibly shaping how the strand is demonstrated.

Score Bands

  • Basic

    Structure & Cohesion is present but applied inconsistently or only at a surface level.

  • Strong

    Structure & Cohesion is applied consistently, with genuine understanding of what this task requires.

  • Excellent

    Structure & Cohesion is applied with sustained precision throughout, shaped by the specific demands of this task.

Language Choices

Strong writing this week shows Language Choices applied consistently — not just in isolated moments. Assessors look for precise legal vocabulary that serves this task, so the explanation communicates the system accurately.

What markers scan for

  • Language Choices applied consistently throughout — not only in isolated moments.
  • The specific task and topic visibly shaping how the strand is demonstrated.

Score Bands

  • Basic

    Language Choices is present but applied inconsistently or only at a surface level.

  • Strong

    Language Choices is applied consistently, with genuine understanding of what this task requires.

  • Excellent

    Language Choices is applied with sustained precision throughout, shaped by the specific demands of this task.

Now read · Student sample

How the Australian Legal System Works

Year 10 sample · \~300 words

Student sample for assessment

Written by a Year 10 student in Shepparton, Victoria, Australia.

The Australian legal system is structured around two distinct sources of law: legislation, which is law made by parliaments, and common law, which is law developed through court decisions over time. Legislation takes precedence over common law when the two conflict, but common law remains important in areas where parliament has not legislated. Australia also has a federal structure, which means that both the Commonwealth Parliament and state parliaments have the authority to make law, though the Commonwealth prevails in areas of conflict under section 109 of the Constitution. Australian courts operate in a hierarchy. At the base of the hierarchy are local and magistrates courts, which handle less serious criminal matters and civil disputes involving smaller amounts. Above these are the district or county courts, which deal with more serious criminal trials and civil matters. At the state level, the Supreme Court is the highest court within each state and can hear appeals from lower courts. At the federal level, the Federal Court and the Federal Circuit and Family Court of Australia deal with matters of federal law. At the apex of the entire system sits the High Court of Australia, which is the final court of appeal and has the authority to interpret the Constitution. Law is made and applied through a process that involves the interplay of all three branches of government: the legislature makes law through Acts of Parliament, the executive administers and enforces it, and the judiciary interprets and applies it through the courts. The doctrine of the separation of powers is intended to ensure that no single branch holds all three functions, providing a check on the exercise of governmental power. When courts interpret legislation, their decisions become part of the body of common law and can themselves be interpreted by higher courts over time, in a process that means the law is always developing through application.