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Part 1

How to Write

Narrative – Short story

A short story draws a reader into a character’s world and carries them through an experience that changes something. It is written for an audience who wants to be engaged and moved — not just informed. The tone is vivid and personal, making the reader feel present in the moment and curious about what comes next.

  • Ideas & content: Give your character a clear situation and a problem or tension that matters. Include specific details rather than general descriptions, and make sure something genuinely changes by the end.
  • Structure & cohesion: Move from orientation to complication to resolution. Use paragraph breaks to shift scenes or time, and connect moments with time words and action to keep the story moving forward.
  • Voice & audience: Find a consistent narrative voice that brings the reader close to the character’s experience. Show feelings through actions and reactions — not just by stating them.
  • Language choices: Choose strong verbs and sensory detail. Use dialogue to reveal character. Vary sentence length — shorter sentences create tension, longer ones build atmosphere.
  • Conventions: New speaker, new line — every time. Use speech marks correctly. Keep your tense consistent throughout.

Common pitfalls: Starting too slowly with too much backstory — get into the situation quickly and let detail emerge naturally. Telling the reader how a character feels instead of showing it through what the character does.

Part 2

Your Task Plan for Today

The brief

Question: Write a story set during a period when a small group of characters are unexpectedly confined together. Focus on what changes between them during that time.

Stimulus: A sudden, heavy storm traps a small group of people somewhere unexpected — a community hall, a school building, a stranger’s house. The group does not know each other well. The storm is long.

Task Analysis: This task asks you to write a story where the real subject is what happens between people when ordinary escape routes are removed. The storm and the setting are the frame; the changes between characters are what the story is actually about. A strong response will develop character relationships through specific moments rather than simply describing the situation.

Quick Plan

Before you write, plan:

  • The setting — where are they confined, and what details make it feel real?
  • The characters — two or three is enough; give each a distinct way of being
  • The change — three or four moments where something shifts between characters
  • The ending — how have things changed by the time the storm ends?

Setting snapshot

Establish the setting early with specific sensory detail — not just where it is, but how it feels to be confined there during a storm. The physical environment shapes how the characters behave and what they notice.

Characters & want

Each character should want something slightly different from the situation — even if it is just to be left alone. These small tensions make the confinement interesting. Keep character introductions brief and specific.

Show, don’t tell details

Show the change between characters through small actions, dialogue and what is noticed. Avoid telling the reader that characters ‘started to understand each other’ — let it happen in specific, observable moments.

Ending technique

The ending should make it clear that the confinement changed something, without spelling out what it was. A moment of action or decision that signals the shift is more powerful than an explanation.