Y09W30PA - Should Australia Trial a Universal Basic Income?

This week you wrote a persuasive submission to an economic policy committee on whether Australia should trial a Universal Basic Income. Now you'll read another student's piece and judge how strong it is. Working through how markers evaluate submissions sharpens your ability to apply the same lens to your own work.

Part 1

The Assessor Scorecard for

Persuasive – Submission

A persuasive submission to a policy committee is specific and evidence-based. It doesn't rely on emotion — it relies on reasoning about consequences and principles.

Ideas & Content

Argument rests on substantive reasoning — economic evidence, fairness principles or predictions about consequences. The strongest submissions develop reasoning in depth. They acknowledge what's genuinely uncertain and what's supported by evidence. They address real strengths in the opposing view to gain credibility.

  • Substantive reasoning: grounds the case in evidence, fairness and likely consequences.

Structure & Cohesion

Introduce your position early; develop reasoning point by point. Address opposing views; conclude with why your position is preferable. Transitions show how each idea builds on or complicates what came before. Without clear structure, readers lose track even if individual points are strong.

  • Policy sequence: states the position early, then develops reasoning step by step.

Audience & Purpose

Avoid vague language like 'might work' or 'could be good'. Use specific terms — 'reduce poverty', 'increase labour force participation'. Be honest about uncertainty; 'may' and 'could' signal careful thinking, not weakness. Clichés such as 'common sense' or 'real people' weaken economic argument.

  • Specific wording: replaces vague support with precise claims and qualifications.

Language Choices

Sentences are clear and direct. Paragraphs develop single points. Numbers are presented clearly and consistently. Spelling and punctuation are accurate; technical correctness keeps focus on the argument.

  • Direct sentences: keep the policy argument clear and efficient.

Conventions

Your audience is a policy committee — intelligent, busy people who hear all sides. They need to understand your position quickly and your reasoning clearly. They expect you to engage with complexity, not oversimplify. Your purpose is to help them make a good decision, not to trick them.

  • Committee fit: speaks to intelligent readers weighing multiple sides.

Part 2

Today’s Marking Targets

Task in one sentence

Take a position on whether Australia should conduct a UBI trial, support it with substantive reasoning, and address at least one significant opposing argument.

Let’s Focus

Three strands matter most this week: Ideas & Content, Structure & Cohesion and Language Choices. The ideas decide whether your reasoning is substantive or generic. The structure decides whether readers can follow your case. The language decides whether your economic argument reads as precise or vague.

Ideas & Content

Strong submissions develop substantive reasoning specific to UBI. They appeal to consequences, principles or evidence. They don't just state a position — they explain why a committee should adopt it. The best submissions acknowledge real strengths in the opposing view while explaining why their position is still preferable.

What markers scan for

  • Clear position stated early.
  • Substantive reasoning: appeals to consequences, evidence or principles specific to UBI.
  • Genuine engagement with at least one significant opposing argument.

Score Bands

  • Basic

    Position is stated but reasoning is vague or generic; opposing view is ignored or dismissed.

  • Strong

    Clear position with substantive reasoning; opposing view is acknowledged, though engagement could be deeper.

  • Excellent

    Clear position with specific, well-developed reasoning; genuine engagement with opposing concerns; acknowledges nuance and uncertainty.

Structure & Cohesion

Clear structure guides readers through reasoning. The strongest submissions establish direction early, develop points logically, address opposition, and explain why their position prevails. Transitions show how ideas build. Without structure, even good reasoning gets lost.

What markers scan for

  • Clear, early statement of position.
  • Logical progression of reasoning; each section builds on previous sections.
  • Clear transitions between ideas.

Score Bands

  • Basic

    Structure is unclear; ideas jump around; hard to follow the argument.

  • Strong

    Structure is generally clear; reasoning progresses logically, though some transitions could be smoother.

  • Excellent

    Clear, purposeful structure; reasoning unfolds logically; smooth transitions show how ideas build.

Language Choices

Precise language makes economic argument credible. Vague qualifiers and clichés weaken policy argument. Strong submissions use specific language, appropriate hedging that acknowledges uncertainty without undermining main claims, and avoid clichés. Tone is professional and measured.

What markers scan for

  • Specific language and precise terminology relevant to economic policy.
  • Appropriate hedging that shows careful thinking without excessive uncertainty.
  • Absence of clichés and sweeping generalisations.

Score Bands

  • Basic

    Language is vague, relies on clichés, or uses imprecise terms; excessive hedging or overconfidence.

  • Strong

    Language is generally precise; mostly free of clichés; appropriate qualifiers present.

  • Excellent

    Precise, purposeful language throughout; appropriate hedging signals careful thinking; no clichés.

Now read · Student sample

Should Australia Trial a Universal Basic Income?

Year 9 sample · \~400 words

Student sample for assessment

Written by a Year 9 student in Doncaster, Victoria, Australia.

I submit that Australia should conduct a limited, carefully evaluated UBI trial. While legitimate concerns about cost and work incentives exist, they can be managed through trial design, and the potential benefits for economic security and poverty reduction justify the experiment. Automation is reducing employment opportunities faster than new jobs are created. Manufacturing, retail, and driving are all subject to technological displacement. A two-year trial in a selected region would generate evidence on whether UBI functions as a stabilising force during this transition. The cost of a limited trial is modest compared to the cost of increased unemployment, underemployment, and poverty. A regional trial affecting perhaps 20,000 people would cost roughly $150–200 million across two years—substantial but not unprecedented for economic policy research. Critics rightly point out that UBI could be prohibitively expensive if implemented nationally. But a trial is not full implementation. It provides evidence before committing to nationwide policy. The trial would generate data on participation rates, employment effects, and actual costs in Australian conditions. This evidence would be more valuable than international studies because Australia's labour market, social security system, and cost of living are specific to our context. The concern about work incentives deserves serious attention. Would UBI reduce people's willingness to work? The evidence is mixed. Some trials show minimal employment reduction; others show larger reductions, particularly for secondary earners. What this mixed evidence suggests is that employment effects depend on trial design—amount of payment, interaction with other welfare, population studied. An Australian trial should test these variables systematically to understand whether UBI supports or undermines participation. The strongest case for trial is poverty reduction and economic security. Current welfare systems are complex and stigmatising. They leave gaps that UBI could address. People in precarious work face periods without income. A basic income would reduce the stress and disruption these periods cause. For young people entering the labour market, the disabled, and others facing barriers to stable employment, a guaranteed basic income provides security. The moral case for this is significant. Opponents worry that trial data won't transfer to policy. A regional trial won't predict national effects perfectly—migration, labour market dynamics, and macroeconomic effects differ at larger scale. But this argues for conducting trial carefully and drawing appropriately modest conclusions, not for avoiding evidence-gathering entirely. Perfect prediction is impossible; reasonable trial design can provide guidance. A two-year trial in one region—perhaps a regional centre with moderate unemployment—would test whether UBI reduces poverty, what employment effects occur, and what implementation challenges emerge. It would not prove that nationwide UBI is viable; it would generate evidence. Australia should conduct this trial.